Author’s Note For Ready To Please

Author’s Note For Ready To Please

Ready To Please came out of my desire to explore virtual reality as a means for brainwashing and that the actions within a VR setting could affect someone in real life too. I am fond of the “male protagonist loves his friends, doesn’t want to harm her, but…” premise and Grace was a lovely version of the tamed female love.

I introduced her friends, wrote more, and then realized I had to do something with them. Readers can decide how they feel about this, but I rather impulsively turned one into a drone and the other into the third in their relationship in a very protected manner. I think that is rather sweet.

This story was originally written in the first-person for an anthology. This is why the story is fairly brief in nature. I will post that version at some point in the future, but this is the rewritten and more true to how I generally write third-person version.

Author’s Note For Born To Make You Happy II

Author’s Note For Born To Make You Happy II

A sequel to Born To Make You Happy was teased at the end of the story, a brief outline was prepared, and I wrote it out in 2016. So many of my stories begin with two women: One ends up brainwashed, but in some kind of loving, caring, relationship with a man, but the other ends up a mindless lovedoll or whore. I bet a shrink would have a field day with that!

This was the era too where I was writing a lot about the differences between “classy” women and ones more into debauchery. As I commented in the author’s note for BTMYH, I am not as comfortable making those distinctions anymore as I was back then. I still love the “fork” of two friends’ paths, but without the debasement.

Every woman in my stories, in my fantasies, has a purpose, and they should be affirmed and praised for it, whether the elegant obedient housewife or the bimbo lovedoll or anything else in the middle. Too many stories in this kink completely swing and miss at that kind of thing.

There is a tease at the end of this story for Madison’s mother. Maybe I will have to write that out one day.

New Release: Born To Make You Happy

New Release: Born To Make You Happy

Amanda Jane Carlson is used to getting her way. Whether through popularity, wealth, or by using her body, she gets what she wants, when she wants it. The only imperfection in her life is college. Failing her classes during the fall semester, she uses her body to get the grades to keep her expense account flowing. In the spring, she turns to a young man named Timothy Larmer for help. He gives her some special recordings that make her feel great and realize that she was born to make men happy.

This story is now available on mcstories and readonlymind.

You can read the author’s note here.

Author’s Note For Born To Make You Happy

Author’s Note For Born To Make You Happy

Born To Make You Happy was the first story I ever wrote an outline for while in college. It would not be the first story I actually wrote, but ended up the second one. I like, yet hate, this story a lot. Let me explain…

I was at university in 1998 when I discovered the EMCSA. I was stunned to find others who shared the same fetishes I did, but also a bit freaked out. I had no idea how to talk to them and probably said a lot of dumb bullshit to others, did a few very horny things, and generally screwed up a couple of relationships as I tried to incorporate more D/s into my life. I broke down crying telling someone I was sleeping with about the granular specifics of my fetishes, sent them a few stories, and they disowned me quickly afterwards.

in 1999, I had to take a required math course. I hate math, but the professor was really helpful and I passed pretty easily. I did group work with another young lady and two guys. She had them wrapped around her finger tips. Her flirtations and teasing would lead to them doing all the group work for us. They made up study sheets for us and all.

We began hanging out and getting lunch together beforehand. She was funny, beautiful, and we had a blast hanging out. We went to the mall together a few times too. I had never had men really flirt with me the way they did with her and it was really interesting. I was too busy exploring pervy stuff online to notice either way if they flirted with me.

She was fun to hang out with until I noticed how cruel she could be at times. Friends would walk away and she would immediately talk shit about them. Those guys from our class? One of them asked her out and she ghosted him. He seemed sweet.

The semester ended and we spoke a few times over break. Remember that this was before smart phones, social media, and even, more or less, texting, so this was the time of AIM, ICQ, and IRC. We spoke on ICQ a few times briefly. She blew me off the next semester and I always saw her with other friends and some guy who was in a class with her.

I was sitting in the library one day. It was around spring break, maybe right before it, and I pulled my notebook out and started writing. I hated how she treated the guys and wrote Amanda in the vein of her. The male protagonist was loosely based on one of the guys too. I penned an outline for a story pretty quickly. I typed it up, sent a copy to a few people, including at least one person who will read this post, and let it sit on my computer until the next year. I wrote True Love first, which is another long story and explanation, and then Born To Make You Happy was written next.

I do regret a few things: I feel like I might be a little too hard on Amanda near the end. There is a bit of slut shaming I am not proud of here. I am not fond of the way feminists use the phrase “internalized misogyny,” but I had a lot of it back then. I would approach this story a lot different now. So many of the women in my stories who it is clear the narrative deems as bad being those in power or positions of authority is a very deliberate choice. A promiscuous college student is nothing compared to the corrupt girlboss, ladder hopping reporter, or career obsessed wife.

I teased a sequel at the end and that story will be up in the usual places shortly.

New Release: Unruly Women Reform Academy

New Release: Unruly Women Reform Academy

A technologist, fed up with his defiant girlfriend, sets out to correct the attitudes of not only her, but other unruly women at the new and very modern reform academy he founded in their city. While the technology may be modern, the gender roles learned will be very old fashioned.

This story is now available on mcstories and readonlymind.

You can read the author’s note here.

Author’s Note For Unruly Women Reform Academy

Author’s Note For Unruly Women Reform Academy

First, this was a commission and I am grateful to the person who commissioned the story. The basic premise was make the women very robotic after being programmed and then I suggested the academy part of it. I love the idea of a brainwashed woman being given a tour without knowing she has already been compromised until the end of the tour. Really hot stuff. I also love showing off the little world that I built in the story. Makes it feel more expansive and lived in. That is a direction a lot of my newer stories are going in for sure.

I think this story is the only time I will ever work with these characters, but who knows.

New Release-Domestic Doll Services: The Billionaire & The Bimbos

New Release-Domestic Doll Services: The Billionaire & The Bimbos

John Davidson, self made, in his own estimation at least, billionaire, is fed up with his current girlfriend, the vapid pop star Savannah Sweetness. Twice divorced already, her uppity attitudes have grown old and, bored with her, he turns his eye towards her college dropout, activist, daughter Melanie, who has just returned to the fold after being shamed out of her college after a falling out with the activist crowd. With the help of Domestic Doll Services, John is able to get the women in his life to see that their duty and purpose is to be good, obedient, bimbos.

This story is available on mcstories and readonlymind.

You can read the author’s note here.

Author’s Note For Domestic Doll Services: The Billionaire & The Bimbos

Author’s Note For Domestic Doll Services: The Billionaire & The Bimbos

This story was a commission. The basic premise was a rich tycoon bounces between women and when he gets bored he has them turned into Domestic Dolls and frozen in place in a trophy room. I think some character inspirations are pretty obvious here, but there were also some science fiction influences too like Westworld. I LOVE the idea of therapists being involved in the Diabolical Mind Control Conspiracy. Gradually changing someone over a bunch of visits is a really hot idea.

I laugh at myself for the name “Savannah Sweetness.” We tried to brainstorm a really inane pop singer name and it popped into my head one day and I knew it was going to be the one for the story. Making her daughter use that last name too is hilarious.

Speaking of said daughter, Melanie is, in some ways, the cliche liberal protester turned bimbo type, but it is deeper than that. Her friends turn on her because they believe the guy she was sleeping with over her. That seems typical of a certain kind of liberal feminist. I really liked writing the scene where her deeply sexist therapist had a more enlightened and progressive view of that situation than her protester friends. Melanie is generally really sad and frustrated with her situation.

I also greatly enjoy mocking how banal journalism has become in the modern age and how stupid the people who fall for it are. I used to work with women who had all the feminist credentials, but then bought into every obviously planted celebrity news story. Professional wrestling is more credible.

There is a tease for a sequel at the end as well. Poor John just doesn’t have the attention span for one woman…

Maybe one day? This story was a blast to write.

Inspirations: Whyte, Colleen’s The Ideals of Others.

New Release: Loyal Servants of NILE

New Release: Loyal Servants of NILE

When a woman working for a company discovers the truth about one of their more nefarious plots, her brash and outspoken nature make her a liability. After being taken to a secretive location, she learns how to put aside her disobedient nature and become a loyal servant of NILE.

This story is available on mcstories and readonlymind.

You can read the author’s note here.