At the Feminine Obedience Academy, in the near future, women are trained to be docile, feminine, and obedient. Yoshiko Kurosaza is a new student at the academy who learns her purpose in life is to obey men.
This story is now available on mcstories and readonlymind.
You can read the author’s note here.
Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko was greatly inspired by this fantasy of mine where university learning for women is replaced with, well, feminine obedience training. There have been a number of great stories on mcstories over the years that have used that trope plus the never published one that Vendatrix teases us with at the end of Pleasure Crews of the Ultimate Lovedolls. The STUDENT, SERVANT, DOLL semesters were inspired by correspondence I had with a reader about what different semester would look like for a student at the Feminine Obedience Academy. I left it loose at first and then the needs of the story’s plot filled in a lot of the rest.
I brought in some of the male controllers from my Domestic Doll Services stories as well. I think I am settling on a bunch of those for purposes of continuity and consistency. There are also a handful of allusions to my District Nine Slave Adoption Agency story, which takes place in the same universe. I bet Brett, Melissa, and their daughters will make some cameos at some point.
Yoshiko has been one of my favorite protagonists over the years. She is so cheerful and passionate, yet also eager to submit and longing for control. I enjoyed writing her journey throughout the early months of 2021. Readers will meet her sister Utami in an upcoming story called Emerald’s Service that is coming soon.
The next Feminine Obedience Academy story will, as the epilogue notes, star a young woman named April and her best friend Melinda. I hear one of FOA’s professors has their eye on her…
Inspirations: thrall’s Mirrored In Your Eyes planted the seed in my mind for having different roles for each semester. Vendatrix’s Ultimate Lovedoll stories are, of course, a huge influence. trilby else’s Legacy is another academy story I reread before writing this one.
At the Feminine Obedience Academy in the near future, women are trained to be docile, feminine, and obedient. In Barbara R. Wetzel’s first novel length story, Yoshiko Kurosaza is a new student at the academy who learns her purpose in life is to obey men.
This story is now available on mcstories and readonlymind.
(apologies for this being late…I cut my hand while making breakfast on Saturday and could not really type much over the weekend!)
This week I wrote 2,126 words for Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko. This story is coming along nicely and I think is going to end up being around 20k-25k words by the end. I am building out a larger world so some of my other unfinished stories can be put under the Feminine Obedience Academy umbrella.
My story Love Falls Rejuvenation Spa is now on the new Read Only Mind website as noted earlier this week.
An exclusive update for Patrons will be going out shortly. If you wanted to become a Patron of my writing or commission a story you can do that here.
Patrons also get access to my new character/story bible, which was updated this week with The Romance & Submission Of Melissa Sanderson.
This week I wrote 1,575 words on Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko. I spent the last two days of the week going through the draft, which is about 6,000 words so far, and cleaning up a continuity error and a few other issues. I’ll be able to proceed with normal writing on Monday. I’m hoping to have this story done by the end of February.
My story Mommy’s Hypno Princess is now on the new Read Only Mind website as noted earlier in the week.
An exclusive update for Patrons will be going out shortly. If you wanted to become a Patron of my writing or commission a story you can do that here.
Patrons also get access to my new character/story bible, which was updated this week with The Swift Flight: Expanded Edition.
Going to try to do this each week…
This week I wrote 2,015 words on Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko, which is going to be, hopefully, my next published story. I have a bunch of half written stories that I think can be merged under a new “Feminine Obedience Academy” series at this year goes on. I really, really, want to clear out that backlog this year. That had been a 2020 goal before well *waves around wildly*
My story Domestic Doll Services: Bimbo Casino is now on the new Read Only Memory website as noted earlier in the week.
An exclusive update for Patrons will also be going out shortly. If you wanted to become a Patron of my writing or commission a story you can do that here.
Patrons also get access to my new character/story bible, which was updated this week with True Love and The Unruly Women Academy.
Barbara R. Wetzel 