Author’s Note For Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko

Author’s Note For Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko

Feminine Obedience Academy: Yoshiko was greatly inspired by this fantasy of mine where university learning for women is replaced with, well, feminine obedience training. There have been a number of great stories on mcstories over the years that have used that trope plus the never published one that Vendatrix teases us with at the end of Pleasure Crews of the Ultimate Lovedolls. The STUDENT, SERVANT, DOLL semesters were inspired by correspondence I had with a reader about what different semester would look like for a student at the Feminine Obedience Academy. I left it loose at first and then the needs of the story’s plot filled in a lot of the rest.

I brought in some of the male controllers from my Domestic Doll Services stories as well. I think I am settling on a bunch of those for purposes of continuity and consistency. There are also a handful of allusions to my District Nine Slave Adoption Agency story, which takes place in the same universe. I bet Brett, Melissa, and their daughters will make some cameos at some point.

Yoshiko has been one of my favorite protagonists over the years. She is so cheerful and passionate, yet also eager to submit and longing for control. I enjoyed writing her journey throughout the early months of 2021. Readers will meet her sister Utami in an upcoming story called Emerald’s Service that is coming soon.

The next Feminine Obedience Academy story will, as the epilogue notes, star a young woman named April and her best friend Melinda. I hear one of FOA’s professors has their eye on her…

Inspirations: thrall’s Mirrored In Your Eyes planted the seed in my mind for having different roles for each semester. Vendatrix’s Ultimate Lovedoll stories are, of course, a huge influence. trilby else’s Legacy is another academy story I reread before writing this one.

Recent Reads: Agent With Immunity + Paces

Recent Reads: Agent With Immunity + Paces

Recently, I have read two stories that have impressed me a lot. Agent With Immunity is an ongoing story about a mind control detective (I guess?) who arrests mind control criminals, while taking advantage of the evildoers’ devices for his own means as well. The author has built up an interesting story world that is easy to visualize and enjoy. The story is well written with a good level of eroticism. There is plenty that could go wrong with a story like this, but so far so good. I look forward to new installments.

Paces is an older story recommended, I think, by fembotheather in the forums. This is one of trilby else’s earliest stories, but all the trademark aspects of his writing are there. There are some very interesting trance scenes and an engaging plot. A few aspects of this story are turning out to be very influential in something I am working on right now.

Outcall

Outcall

The newest chapter of Outcall is very impressive. trilby else has, as usual, created a world filled with brainwashing twists and turns, this time involving mind controlled sex workers. There are some really erotic sections and well done mind control sequences. This one will make my reader’s picks the next time I update it (normally during the holidays).

Story Review: Honeycomb

Story Review: Honeycomb

Honeycomb by trilby else-This story is a sequel to one of trilby else’s best stories Hive.  Like Hive, it involves a droned, although the situation turns out to be a little more complex than that, girl who is given back her old personality to serve the Hive.  I like this story a lot…anyone familiar with trilby else’s stories will know the probable endgame, but there are some curious twists that kept me guessing for most of the story.  This is easily one of his best stories.

Story Review: Golden

Story Review: Golden

Golden by Trilby Else-This is a typical Trilby style story with a doomed victim, involving science fiction Amazons and a series of betrayals, but then there is a really excellent twist at the end.  If you enjoy his work, this is one of his best stories.  It is from 2001, but updated in 2006…I am pretty sure I missed it the first time around but caught it when there was an update.

Story Review: Outcall

Story Review: Outcall

Outcall by Trilby Else-I have to say it is one of the best stories I have read in awhile. I have faith in Trilby Else being able to come up with more interesting twists and turns as the story goes on. In this one a prostitute goes to a shy, kind of dorky, young woman’s home to role play hypnosis with her. If you’ve read any of Trilby’s stories before, what happens next is probably pretty clear. A very erotic and engaging story. It seems to be stuck at chapter five, but Trilby often comes back to stories later and continues them.